Selasa, 24 Mei 2011

comparison contrast essay



Living in our own House or Boarding House
            Not all people live near the school or campus. Some of them feel fired because they have to waste much time to go that place. There are two options to solve this problem. Living in boarding house near the school or keeping staying in our own house. Both of these places are really different. Some people think that it is more comfortable to live in our own house but some people else do not think so. There are some differences between living in boarding house and in our own house.
Living in our own house is not always fun because we cannot do whatever we want. We have to obey the rule in our family. Then we have to help our mother to do housekeeping. If we stay far from school, we have to take twice or three times public transportation and it will spend much money to pay the cost also we will spend much time to go there. Then we have to have lunch at school because we cannot go back to house, but the luckily living in our own house is we can ask money to our parents every time. Then we should not cook by our self because our mother has prepared it.
Really different with living in boarding house, we can do everything that we want. We can take a rest for a long time without thinking the housekeeping because we just stay in a small room. Also nobody can disturb us during our rest time. If we stay in boarding house we should not spend much money to go to school or campus because of course we stay near the school and just go by foot. It makes more economical. Then we can go back at noon for have lunch. The disadvantage is if we want to eat, we have to cook by our self. We must be able to cook everything because nobody will help. If we do not have money anymore we cannot ask easily because we do not live with our parents. So we have to solve the problem.
            So, for people who live so far from your school or campus, think it over. You have to choose the best thing your life. If you think that living in boarding house better, let’s do it but if you still want to stay in your own house, it is your choice. So, be the selective one because we have been adult.
           

4 komentar:

  1. i think your essay is good enough. the topic is interesting. be carefully with grammar.
    i think thats all.
    thank you :)

    BalasHapus
  2. i really like your topic :)
    it is your skill..hheheh

    your essay is good..your grammar is good and you have many ideas.
    keep writing

    BalasHapus
  3. nimul..

    your essay is good enough..

    but i find a little mistake,.

    in paragraph 1 L 4 "different" i think add "s"..

    that's from me..

    keep spirit,.. :))

    BalasHapus
  4. Hi mila,

    I think your topic is interesting, I cannot find the mistake.

    still to be carefully with your grammar .

    I think that's all from me .

    keep writing :)

    BalasHapus