Selasa, 24 Mei 2011

describing myself

Between Me, Mila and Myself
             Not many people know about me, just my friends at school, in my neighborhoods and some people in collage. I think I am friendly girl, but I cannot find a friend easily. I have to know the personality that person first, after that if I feel comfort; they will be a friend for me.
             My name is Mila Multin, everyone call me Mila or my close friends call me Multin. Actually, I do not like about that, but if they enjoy with it, never mind. I am 20 years old. Now I am studying at State University of Padang in English Department. I think I am the oldest girl in my class. Actually I graduated from Senior High School in 2009, but I continue my education here in 2010. So all of my friends are younger than me. I do not care about it because no limit to get knowledge. My father said that never give up and keep spirit to make your dream come true.
             I am the one who rather tall with average weight, black short hair and pointed nose. I have small eyes and thin lips. I have an oval face with so many moles in my face. My hair is straight black hair and I have tan skin. Everyone said that I look like my mother but I do not think so. My sister, my mother and I look so different. My sister is the tall one with white skin and my mother has black long hair with round face.
             I like wearing t-shirt with cardigan and jeans. Sometimes I wear shirt with skirt to the campus. My style is really simple with pumps. I do not like wearing dresses because they look like so girly. I am a girl who not too feminine and not too boyish. I do not care about trend fashion in the world, if I feel comfortable to wear something, I will wear it.
             My hobby is watching TV and listens to the music. I really like Korean movie. If I have free time, I will spend all of my free time to do it. I have many collections DVDs of Korean movie. Sometimes, if I cannot sleep, I will listen to it. The song makes me feel better. I can forget my entire problem if I listen to that song. Also I like teaching someone. I usually explain about the lesson to my cousin if she cannot do it by herself. I hope someday, if I graduate from this University I will be a teacher or lecturer.
             Nobody can manage my life, including my parents. I will do whatever I want but I can receive advice from anyone. You have to believe that I am a friendly woman. I care about someone around me. So, do not judge me like a bad person if you do not know me well.



MILA MULTIN (18260)
NK2/2010
WRITING 1 ACTIVITY 3
DESCRIBING MYSELF
PROCES 4
(Final Process)
8-4-2011

5 komentar:

  1. I think your essay is good enough because I have checked it before,..
    hahaha

    I think it's good to you to add your photo,..


    That's it,.
    So far so good,..

    Keep Writing,..

    :)

    BalasHapus
  2. "Not many people know about me"
    you'd better change it with "many people do not me who i am exactly"
    "My hobby is watching TV and listens to the music"
    you should chane is with are

    BalasHapus
  3. haii mila..
    your essay is good..

    i thinks it's better to you use 2 space in your essay..
    because it is so close, i think.
    :)

    please comment my essay..

    BalasHapus
  4. hi mila,
    I think your essay is good enough but it's better for you to add you photo .

    that from me,

    keep writing :)
    comment in my blog too .

    BalasHapus
  5. milaaaa........

    actually, i don't like this yellow background. It's so bright and so shiny..

    BUT, this is a good Essay. Now, i know you closer than before..

    remember one thing:
    Do not forget to put your comment on my blog,.
    Thanks,.

    BalasHapus