Selasa, 24 Mei 2011

decribing my idol

My Idol is a Superstar
          There are many actress and actors in this world, such as in America, Indonesia and Korea. I really like Korean entertainers because they have many talents. They have many films that success in the world. This is because they have many multitalented actress and actor. I like one of them, she is Choi Ji Woo.
         Choi Ji Woo was born in Paju, Gyeonggi, South Korea on June 11, 1975 and grew up there. She graduated from Hang Yang University (theatre/ film major) and Pusan University (dance Major) in South Korea but had not graduated in Pusan University, only studied one year and left to filming. She made her debut in the series “Beautiful Days”, in which she started along site Lee Byung-Hun. She is being titled “Korean Twins” with Lee Young-Ae. I started love her when I watched her drama “Stairway to Heaven”. She is really full acting in this drama.
         She is 26 years old. She does not get married yet. She is very tall; it is about 5’8” or 1.75 meters. She has oval face with slanting eyes and pointed nose. Her hair is short with straight hair, also has white skin, rosy cheeks, small ears and regular teeth. I think she is really perfect.
         Choi likes take a nap, if she has a little bit time, she will spend it to take a rest because she has many activities. The bad habit of Choi is she usually forgets the scenario when the director directed her. The director has to take 3 or more the same scene. She asked that she cannot change her bad habits.
         I will love Choi Jii Woo forever. I have taken many pictures about her from internet. I have downloaded the original soundtrack from the drama that she had acting there. I really want to meet her. If I meet her, I will ask anything to her. Oh, I cannot say anything if one day I meet her. Go Choi Ji Woo. Give the best for your fans.

MILA MULTIN
NK2/ 2010
WRITING 1 ACTIVITY 2
DESCRIBING MY IDOL
Process 5
(Final Process)
8-4-2011

3 komentar:

  1. milla,..

    your essay is interesting,.

    but i find a little mistake,..
    in paragraph 1 L3 "This is " i think its better to you change the word "that is"


    keep spirit ..
    :))

    BalasHapus
  2. Hi milla,

    I think your essay is good enough.
    I am very interested about it .

    still pay attention with your grammar .

    that's all from me :)

    BalasHapus
  3. milaaa..
    i dont know who is your idol..
    i thinks you should put a picture in your essay..
    hehhe

    thanks for your comment..

    BalasHapus